Madness Vengence 2 hmm...
You got the graphics right. Thats all I can really say, and you probably copied and pasted them from the looks of it.
The bullet animation is wrong. There should be a blast from the gun, and instead of showing the bulet moving in a crappy 2-3 frame movie tween, there should just be a thin white line.
the "speech" was a little crappy too. firstly speech shouldn't even be in madness. secondly there weren't even speechbubbles.
The only thing i think you put a bit of creativity into is the storyline... Madness movie's don't need creativity for story lines, its just death, and its the DEATH that needs creativity! there was only about a 4 second piece of animation that looked slightly cool enough to be madness, and thats not enough to qualify it.