I wonder what the second thing he was gonna do was?
You got the graphics right. Thats all I can really say, and you probably copied and pasted them from the looks of it.
The bullet animation is wrong. There should be a blast from the gun, and instead of showing the bulet moving in a crappy 2-3 frame movie tween, there should just be a thin white line.
the "speech" was a little crappy too. firstly speech shouldn't even be in madness. secondly there weren't even speechbubbles.
The only thing i think you put a bit of creativity into is the storyline... Madness movie's don't need creativity for story lines, its just death, and its the DEATH that needs creativity! there was only about a 4 second piece of animation that looked slightly cool enough to be madness, and thats not enough to qualify it.
Well, if you had half a brain you could realize it was slow motion,
I'm not going to draw a white line, It's a lot more fun, and easier to just draw spent rounds. Not white lines, I'd like to see you do some animation.
1% plot line that makes sense
You got the formulae correct again. You deserve a pat on the back.
Good concept, but it is no more than that
This is so far more of a concept than a game, and for that reason I give it a ten, as the concept is beautiful. I hope you develop it into something that is fun for more than 5 minutes.
the muslim destroyed the binoculars because it was lost.
I'm not sure that would help...
I think I might be able to help...
Great I dea you got there. Its the kinda idea I once made myself and pushed to the back of my mind.
But I've spotted some mechanical problems with the game, not really problems, but would make it much better and user easy.
I'll type it up on my profile, so you can see it there.
This is very good, all i can see that needs doing is perhaps puting in pupils in the eyes and maybe drawing on the frets and strings on that bass, even if there aren't frets and strings or pupils on the original CD cover you could add them in just to make it better.
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